Humanities

There are more than a few issues with this story Duncan. You have not followed the guidelines at all or looked at the rubric, or even dealt with any fact. Number 1 - you did not get plague from being bitten by rats but by the fleas on the rats. 2. You have not described the symtoms effectively or attempted cures at the time 3. or looked at the long term effects on the peasants. You have much much much more ability than this. You really must follow instructions to be able to get the levels that you should. You Need to also get everthing done on time as this helps!!!

Facts about past societies || The piece contains many instances of fact relating to the time that gives a good idea of village life and the black death || The piece contains good amount of fact about village life and death || The piece contains certain items of fact about either the black death or village life but not both. || Limited amounts of factual information from the time. ||
 * ** mm ** || ** 7-8 ** || ** 5-6 ** || ** 3-4 ** || ** 1-2 ** ||
 * Concepts: (time)
 * Thoughts about The Black Death || V. Accurate description and Middle ages thoughts about causes and possible responses to BD || Good description of thoughts on causes and responses || A description of either thoughts on causes or responses but not both || Very limited description on thoughts or inaccurate and not related to thoughts of the time. ||
 * Effects (cause and consequence) || An understanding of the improvements for peasants explained well. Explain consequences on freedom and wealth || Improvements explained well through cause and consequence, although concentration will be on either freedom or wealth || The benefits for peasants are described but not explained very well. || Only basic descriptions. ||
 * Presentation and organisat//ion// || Flawless grammar and spelling. Use of paragraphs. || A few issues relating to grammar and spelling. || More issues || Very untidy and spelling and grammar poor ||